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One small normative change: I relaxed a SHOULD to a MAY when discussing relays writing data out of order. No one is implementing this right now. Fixes #218
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| ## CLIENT_SETUP and SERVER_SETUP {#message-setup} | |||
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| The `CLIENT_SETUP` and `SERVER_SETUP` messages are the first messages exchanged | |||
| by the client and the server; they allows the peers to establish the mutually | |||
| by the client and the server; they allows the endpoints to establish the mutually | |||
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One small normative change: I relaxed a SHOULD to a MAY when discussing relays writing data out of order. No one is implementing this right now.
Fixes #218