improve language of "Unnecessary Correlation" section

* rephrase paragraph
* restore lost hyphen (PR on VCDM2 [also opened](w3c/vc-data-model#1473))

Author: TallTed

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@@ -1339,10 +1339,10 @@ <h3>Unnecessary Correlation</h3>
 
       <p>
 In some cases, such as when [=presenting=] a [=verifiable credential=] that
-contains any other global identifier (such as a driver's license identification
-number), adding one or more global identifier(s) for the status list information
-does not increase correlation harm, since a single globally unique identifier is
-all that is required for correlation.
+contains a global identifier (such as a driver's license identification number),
+adding one or more global identifier(s) for status list information does not
+increase correlation harm, since a single globally unique identifier is all that
+is required for correlation.
       </p>
 
       <p>
@@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ <h3>Unnecessary Correlation</h3>
 <a data-cite="VC-DATA-MODEL-2.0#signature-based-correlation">
 Signature-Based Correlation</a>,
 <a data-cite="VC-DATA-MODEL-2.0#long-lived-identifier-based-correlation">
-Long-Lived Identifier-Based Correlation</a>, and
+Long-Lived-Identifier-Based Correlation</a>, and
 <a data-cite="VC-DATA-MODEL-2.0#metadata-based-correlation">
 Metadata-Based Correlation</a>.
       </p>